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Bloody Addiction
written by DeadInside187
10:38 PM 3/21/05
I need to stop this bloody addiction
The belief that cutting helps is all fiction
This blade has become my only savior in life
For that is why I rush upon this knife
The most selfish act a person can make is to commit suicide
But I inside I feel as though I may have already died
This struggle for happiness keeps me here
When I seem myself I want to shatter the mirror
The only romance I have ever had is with this knife
It sets me free for I am always in strife
When I first see the blood start to pour
It makes me want to slice more and more
Not many people know how I really feel
I always wear this glass that isn’t real
On the outside I’m happy and have lots of friends
But on the inside I’m all alone and waiting for the end
Nothing can relieve the pain except this dagger’s sweet kiss
Oh how I love to feel it right against my wrist
This blade and my wrist are forever bound
For I feel happiness will never be found


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
a poem that i wrote in study hall about wanting to kick the addiction but its too great
please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by *liquid_fire* (3-21-2005 - 11:21 PM)
i felt like that 2 but i stop.that was really good

by rhapsody_lullaby (3-22-2005 - 07:15 AM)
amazing. i can relate.

by (guest) (3-28-2005 - 04:11 PM)
i loved it! this is exactly how i feel. my life sucks but thats the only good thing in my life, or at least thats what it seems like. keep writing. xX*(jen)*Xx

by (guest) (4-8-2005 - 09:40 AM)
i can totaly relate! i love ya poem! is cool!!

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