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falling apart
written by mohawkkid88801:42 AM 3/22/05the thing i never would know
are the people that helped me get through the pain that day.
these dots drip just like my life that you cant see.
we use to pretend that we were both alright but we didnt want it to be this way
they way it is now it makes me sick we dont speak
we just walk right by as a strangers that we meet on the streets
we onced walked togather when you told me that you loved me more
but love isnt true since it failed once more
just keep it in mind that once your time comes it isnt as fun as it is told to be
that people dont allways love eachother for all eternity |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AthiestAnarchist (3-22-2005 - 01:47 AM)
| I liked it. I really think you should expand on it to explain it a little better. I think if you made it longer it would be very very good. |
by floggingfelix (3-22-2005 - 11:38 PM)
| really liked it....plz write more!!!! |
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