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» Poem: The Darkness In My Heart (COMMENTS!!!)
The Darkness In My Heart (COMMENTS!!!)
written by xXlove+hateXx
05:57 AM 3/22/05
u look at me on the outside and
think that im truly myself,
but my black heart puts me aside from everyone els
it doesnt feel anything,
cuz everything is numb,
my actions are based on what my heart wants
so everything i do is dumb.
its the part of me that wants to be alone,
the part that wants to be saved,
the same pain that surrounds it
is the same pain u gave.
i long for the day where all the drama can stop,
when all the hope can rise up from where it droppd
i dont quite remember when all this pain wud start,
but now all i have left inside is
the darkness in my heart.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this poem really sucks. comment anyway

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by xfadingmemoriesx (3-22-2005 - 12:24 PM)
noo it doesnt suck. it's good x] i love it!

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