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Drifting
written by xHunniBunnix06:14 PM 3/22/05Stumble and fall about all day,
Which could be avoided if you looked my way,
But I can't help it if I only dream,
How can I live life if I won't be seen?
Crowds of people stand around me,
But I'm lost in invisibility..... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sevenist_wanderer (3-22-2005 - 06:15 PM)
| Sounds a lot like me. Keep up the good work!
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by not_alive_nor_dead (3-22-2005 - 09:14 PM)
| i love this poem.. it gotsta be one of my faves. it's short and meaning ful... GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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