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Love U (please leave a comment)
written by desy3711:24 PM 3/22/05Written in Pencil
sealed with a kiss
If your my friend than answer this:
Do you love me or do you not
You told once before but i forgot
tell me now and tell the truth
So i will not act like such a goof
Because If i die before you do
I'll to heaven and wait for You
If your not there by judgment day I'll know you went the other way
2 show r love is really true
I'll go to hell to be with you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
if you love life and your partner read them this
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| » Comments / Feedback | by NIRVANAGRL1994 (3-24-2005 - 12:30 AM)
| I READ A POEM LIKE THIS ONCE BUT URS IS BETTER CUZ U HAVE FEELINGS FOR IT AND A PERSON WHO WRITES LIKE THT IS A TRUE POET. |
by (guest) (3-24-2005 - 05:18 PM)
| i like it. It is very good and true |
by katemariehickman (3-24-2005 - 08:34 PM)
by gaara31 (3-24-2005 - 10:17 PM)
| great peom i could really feel what u meant |
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