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» Poem: Final Breath..
Final Breath..
written by my_wrists_are_bleeding
01:37 AM 3/23/05
I feel so alone,
No words can describe it,
I feel hollow,
There is nothing inside,
My love is gone,
I am forever alone,
What to do now?
Sit and watch the blood fall to the floor,
Now I get the knife,
You find me dead,
Nothing but blood around me,
My wish has come true,
I have taken my final breath..


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 06:30 PM)
get over it theres no need to kill your self fucktard

by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 09:48 PM)
your gonna have to pick one or neither... don't mind what the other dude said...

by (guest) (4-3-2005 - 08:56 PM)
evil geust who insulted poem i'l shoot you in the head iof you do that again i mean it ! ~sally~

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