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Still At The Bottom
written by YouSmileAs_I_Die
03:06 AM 3/23/05
Isn't it weird how someone elses words can explaing how you feel? And yet, even with the thoughts of someone having it worse than you, you still feel like the world's falling down around you. Welcome to the nightmare I call my life. Ain't it grand how slitting your wrists makes you feel so much better, but the price you have to pay is feeling like a sorry excuse for a person? That sure as hell is fun. Especially when you get to the point where death is a welcome relief compared to the life your living. My words of encouragement to you are...well, nothing, 'cuz I still feel that way myself.


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by MissMatchClash (3-23-2005 - 03:09 AM)
splendid. that was f-ing splendid. and i love the ending. *nods head* that was f-ing righteous. keep up the good work.

by (guest) (3-23-2005 - 05:27 AM)
that was really good....i can really relate to that!! i love it!! keep up the good work kid and i hope things get better 4 ya....seea later

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