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» Poem: I JUST LOVE YOU(COMMENTS)
I JUST LOVE YOU(COMMENTS)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
03:33 AM 3/23/05
in your arms,my problems fall around
just hearing you breathe
is the sweetest sound
my heart calapses in your hands
looking at you ,im falling as i stand
your eyes hold secrets,i have to know
the pain there would be
if you would ever go
i can breathe you in
as i lay next to you
finally letting ,a love show thru
after tasting your lips
its hard to speak
my greatest muse
is just watching you sleep
you have no idea
how much of me you hold
i admire how you have a soul of gold
i cry tears of joy
knowing you r mine
and i'll be yours till the end of time


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GOD I LOVE HIM

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» Comments / Feedback
by xX-Syn-Xx (3-23-2005 - 03:46 AM)
I like this

by lilfukedupdragonlover (3-23-2005 - 03:46 AM)
that was really good, i almost started to cry. reminds me of mi ex peachez

by Spiffay (3-23-2005 - 10:44 AM)
*tear* (really)

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