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» Poem: loud and fat
loud and fat
written by all_yours
06:02 AM 3/23/05
screaming and you still dont hear me
eating and you still dont see me.
crying and you see me.
starving and you notice.
normality and all is forgotten.
no matter what i do to get your attention unless something has gone wrong you lack in love.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
dont you hate it when you beg for attention and dont recieve it. and when you want it in the least it wont go away.

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by yomamma (3-23-2005 - 06:21 AM)
wow o love it and so true great one keep it up

by yomamma (3-23-2005 - 06:21 AM)
*i

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