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Neverending Black. (Please Comment)
written by xRagDollx07:46 AM 3/23/05I’m walking in the tunnel.
Yet I cannot see the light.
My eyes see only darkness.
Directions are not in sight.
Do they know that I am walking here?
It’s a struggle that I am used to.
For so long I have lived in this black.
This dying feeling is nothing new.
Will somebody throw a rope down for me?
I don’t think they know the blackness I see.
A rope not for escaping the feelings.
I’d like to kick the bucket and be free. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by SweetSoul (3-23-2005 - 07:51 AM)
| This is really good, though the phrase 'kick the bucket' was kind of unexpected. You do a great job rhyming. |
by XxWRITTENDEADxX (3-23-2005 - 07:57 AM)
| Another nice poem. I liked the first one better. Nice words. I enjoyed it, love the last stanza. Good work. |
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