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» Poem: Move on?
Move on?
written by xHunniBunnix
08:24 AM 3/23/05
My friends tell me "Move on"
How can I when all I see is you?
With her and her smug smile,
She doesn't love you,
She just likes making me jelouse,
Leave him! Let him go,
I can't stand it anymore,
Blade in my hand, blood on my wrist,
I drop to the floor, head spinning,
Blood dripping, down my arm,
Painful yet it feels so good,
Live bitch and let this drag on your consience,
But you my love, live and know,
I love you alwways and forever,
I will be waiting here in heven,

How could I "move on?".....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This aint one of my best poems but see wat cha think! =D

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 09:46 PM)
That was pretty good... nice and gory...

by not_alive_nor_dead (3-26-2005 - 02:00 AM)
hey again lolz.. this is one of your best poems that i read so far and i read 5 lolz... it's so much like my life.. how d'you do it lolz... well there i go again with the lolz... neways love your poetry work.. lovez youz... Steph-Aa ~xxx~

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