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words
written by devilchild0109:50 PM 3/23/05words falling off my lips
covered in contempt
from all the broken years
from all the fallen tears
words that wish for nothing more
than to bruise your ego
and tear apart your pride
make you want to run and hide
words that penetrate
sink into the pit of your mind
that will come back to haunt you
no matter where your running to
words so harsh that dig so deep
concentrating on your new found hatred for me
can't rip them from your head
oh the horrible heated words i said
words that will follow you
words meant to make you weep
words to keep you up at night
words so fierce, yet words so right |
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not the best but meh
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| » Comments / Feedback | by night_freak (3-23-2005 - 09:57 PM)
| you have a way with words that lets you say exactly what you want to, cut just how deep you want to, let someone know just how much they mean to you. It's really great, and i wish that i had just a half of the talent you have at writing |
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