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» Poem: War In My Head (comment)
War In My Head (comment)
written by SinGurl
10:25 PM 3/23/05
I knew i could never trust u , i knew how selfish you were and how annoying..
but i couldnt forget u nor left u .. though u killed my sense of passion'n it's beatin all over my ugly body..
then why can u trust my self with u ? i wanna run away to a place that no one there,up in the sky or to a bottom of the red sea .. i want my self not to think of u , i want my heart not to cry for u ..
i am sick of being treaded on, no one to hear no one to understand the shit of me ..
suicide is not a solution anymore , what have i dot to u ???!!! is't b.coz i loved u ? still lovin u ??
or ist my fate to keep searchin the land for that word (REST) ?!!!


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I'M FUCKIN LONELY

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» Comments / Feedback
by dreamkillers (3-23-2005 - 10:30 PM)
mate, that poem ruled! it spoke to me man, that happened to me a while back, i think it wil lbe better wen u check the spelling (hehe) but it ruled anyway! KEEP IT UP!

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