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» Poem: watching my pain go away
watching my pain go away
written by gothicgurl2
12:42 AM 3/24/05
Dawn goes to day,
Dusk goes to night,
And in the morning I won't see the light.
Life is to hard,
I just can't take it.
I'll try to live another day, but I know I won't make it.
There's to much pain for me to take,
Sometimes I wonder if I was a mistake.
Mother say's I wasn't,
Father say's I was,
But I'm so confused right now I think I'm getting a buzz.
I took 10 pills this morning,
thinking it would do,
but obviously it didn't cause I can still see you.
Being here on earth causes me so much pain,
so much pain I have to do something so stupid, and slice my vain...see what you did now I'm dead, but please don't feel guilty in your head, it wasn't you, it was me, but don't worry cause now I'm free!


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i have nothing else to say...i hoped you liked it.

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by freak_in_da_sheets69 (3-24-2005 - 08:55 PM)
thats a good poem and i love how u exspressed ure self in it keep up the good work...

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