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» Poem: Goodbye.
Goodbye.
written by Josh_x
04:45 AM 3/24/05
Your heart is black
Your mind is so cold
You told me i wasn't supposed to care
As i tried to hold onto you
I tried to kiss away all the scars
They still remain
I tried to wipe away your tears
But they only began again
You told me to leave
I knew what you were going to do
But i still left you
Running to my room
Getting out my blade
Dragging it along my wrists
It wasn't enough
Running a bath
Getting in still wearing cltohes
Listening to the water
As it fills to the top
I take one last breath
As i sink down to the bottom
Closing my eyes tight
I think of you
As my lungs fill with water
Goodbye to you
Your taking up my time.


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» Comments / Feedback
by xXlove+hateXx (3-24-2005 - 04:49 AM)
wow, thats so good

by The_sad_girl (3-24-2005 - 05:19 AM)
Very good.I like it a lot.

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