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» Poem: TwiSteD HoUsE (PG 13!)comnts wud b awsum
TwiSteD HoUsE (PG 13!)comnts wud b awsum
written by MintyFreshGirl
05:08 AM 3/24/05
Emily, girl under the slide in the corner
Skinny arms and bruised shins
Gathered like pale sticks around her
Watching with big scared dark rabbit eyes
Watching a giggling group of girls
Their pretty pony tails swing as they play "house"
Fighting over who gets to be the BABY!
"You're the tallest so you're the daddy. And you have to give the kids piggy back rides."
"and you're the prettiest so you be the mommy and you kiss daddy"
But that's not how you play "house" Emily thinks
They have it all wrong! Emily knows how it goes:
Mommy comes home from work and yells at Daddy
Big brother uses Emily's teddy bear to wipe Emily's red red blood off his dick
Sister has deep cuts on his arms again
This happy, confused little game the girls are playing
Doesn't seem correct at all.
Yes, sadly, Emily has it right.
The other little girls with bright eyes run by chirping
Emily bites at her fingertips until she tastes red.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
COMMENTS NEGATIVE OR POSITIVE would be AWESOME! thanks
oh ya, sorry if it was a bit disturbing..

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» Comments / Feedback
by The_sad_girl (3-24-2005 - 05:18 AM)
I can relate to it a lot. I think its great

by (guest) (3-24-2005 - 06:23 AM)
wow. in a good way.

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