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» Poem: The Final Sight (comments please!)
The Final Sight (comments please!)
written by writingpoetry_inadarkroom
06:32 AM 3/24/05
The waves are crashing against the rock.
I am alone on this beach, no one knows.
I sit here, looking over at the dock.
I hear the ocean air, as it blows.

It is getting to be late now, oh no,
The sky is getting dark and filled with stars.
I could stay longer, there's no need to go.
I lay in the sand, looking up at Mars.

I am feeling so unhappy, so blue.
I am getting drowsy, fighting the sleep.
I'm thinking of things of petty value,
As I lay dying on this sandy beach.
The blue ocean is the last that I see,
Lying here, dying here, no one's with me.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this while sitting on my window sill. It was raining.

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by mansonlover91 (3-30-2005 - 11:43 PM)
good poem i like it

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