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Cant take any more
written by mansonlover9104:33 PM 3/24/05This world is driving me crazy
Every1 is worried about you
When u try to kill yourself
But other then that people dont care
They look at you like ur a freak
Then turn their heads and walk away
Why are we even in this world
Why do we put ourselfs in groups
Everyone is the same in the end
We all end up dead
Cold and still
We may go at diffrent times but we are still the same
So why should they care if i leave this life now?
I cant take any more of this
I have to leave this world behind
The blade is in my hand now
I put it to my wrist
I feel it cut my skin it feels good
It is good to leave this world behind |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by not_alive_nor_dead (3-24-2005 - 09:28 PM)
| the poem is good but how do you start off about you then bout a "you" then bout everyone else and then end it about you.. work on that.. but other than that great poem |
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