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» Poem: so unfair
so unfair
written by wibble
05:38 PM 3/24/05
its not fair that she suffers
its not her fault
why is it always her
i dont understand
how people can be so cruel
to hurt someone
where they are already suffering enough
from her mums illness
and her brother being dumb
she has me and needs to know
i wont let nothing happen to you
no not ever il be there
when you walk alone
when your feeling scared
when we break up
and when we are gone......
xxxx Zoe


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Im her best mate we are not a couple)
this was wrote bcoz well if you wanna know message me!!!!!!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by pipa (3-24-2005 - 05:39 PM)
wow! great poem congrats!!! keep writing

by Wobble (3-24-2005 - 10:35 PM)
:'( wow.....thank you so much zoe!!!

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