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a failed attempt...
written by lost_cause01:52 AM 3/25/05A failed attempt to be something...
A crushed attempt to try...
I can't seem to fix myself...
It's gotten hard to get by.
The worst of every situation...
The last to be informed...
I'm left behind and left alone...
I'm trying hard not to be torn.
It's failing, falling, crushing...
It's everything I am...
I can't seem to make it...
I wish I knew the whole plan. |
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i don't like it... i don't know...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by for_future_use42 (3-25-2005 - 01:56 AM)
| I think that this was good. I won't say great, because it ends and your thinking "what next???" But leaving people hanging isn't always the worst thing. |
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