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» Poem: The day you left
The day you left
written by for_future_use42
03:34 AM 3/25/05
Ever hanging in a balance,
caught by the undertoe,
demented visions in my head,
creepin too slow.
love is a fable,
and sweet words only decieve
I ask myself constantly ,
why did i ever believe??
Twisting thoughts to make them real,
Creating demons and monsters,
Deception grows behind closed doors,
as distortion slowly enters.
Love is blind,
and hearts are def,
but still i morn,
the day you left.
You wont understand,
this high is manditory,
and if i cant find it,
I'll relinquish all glory,
I just can't breathe!
when i see your face next to me,
I'd love to see your eyes,
but your image is fading.


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THANK YOU KRYPPLED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by kryppled (3-25-2005 - 03:39 AM)
the day you left... thats the only title i can really think of.....amazing poem though, great lexicon

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