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To all who dont belive..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
written by Ucantsaveme1403:02 PM 3/25/05Anything could make you upset..
Anything in the world can make you cry..
Anything can make you want to die..
Doesnt matter if someone thinks its ok..
It still hurts you..
To all you who think saddness is fake...
I guess you wouldnt know..
Or you just dont want to face the fact that you are sad 2!
Dont yell..
Dont scream..
Dont critize..
These are feelings..
Feelings that you need to let out..
You people who say.."You loser..Your not sad" and crap like that..
Need to get a clue..
There doesnt need to be rhyming..
Could be one word..
Could be a thousand..
Doesnt matter!
Just expressing your self..HELPS!!!!!
Soo all you who dont belive...
Need to try letting feeelings out for themselves..
OR just stay out of everyones lives..AND SEE HOW THEY GET THROUGH IT ALL! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I hate the type of ppl who comment or send u mail saying that u rnt sad..u ass..u loser stfu...on and on...god! I just want to slap them all!!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by doobz (3-25-2005 - 03:03 PM)
| this is true. well done lol xx |
by doobz (3-25-2005 - 03:07 PM)
by dark_love_angel (3-25-2005 - 03:24 PM)
| im glad somebody sees truth. great job... keep it up |
by (guest) (3-26-2005 - 01:26 AM)
| lol, u suck STILL. people who CRITISIZE you (spell correctly, you dumbass) are critisizing you not because they think you're wronmg for expresssing yourself, but because you do it in an unoriginal and shit-like manner. Why dont you take up reading? or...... bike riding? or you can show the WORLD your shitty poetry that and yes, the rythm and words chosen in poetry DO matter, b/c otherwise its not poetry just random fragments of sentences and its just painful to read. |
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