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?Will Our Love Last?
written by Xx_mistik_xX03:08 PM 3/25/05When the fights over,
we'll kiss and make up.
But what would happen,
if we ever fucked up.
Tears came to me,
when i told you wat happened.
U knew how hard it was,
because of this passion.
When u said stuff,
about that other girl.
it made my stomach flip,
and my toes curl.
What would happen,
if there was an end,
would we be able to peice our lives back,
to even be friends?
This question still haunt me,
all through the night.
for what could ever happen,
after a fight.
Love is somthing that most people call,
fake, and phony, not seeing it all.
Love is somthing i hold very dear,
unseen chances, but for all else fear.
Somthing to hold,
somthing to have,
baby thats you,
and thats why i love you.
When im down and hurt,
i know u will call,
when no one else will,
u see through it all.
I love you baby,
lets hope for the best,
we'll prove ourselves wrong,
like we did with all the rest. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Love u Jay
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dark_love_angel (3-25-2005 - 03:27 PM)
| I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!! omg seriously that poem is full of passion, love and truth. i believe its the best one ive read all day so far. thank you for writing it. WOW! |
by TRuPLAYA (3-25-2005 - 03:47 PM)
| i love u to baby and yes our love will last till us day do us part will never come and "nothin is gon tear us apart" |
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