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Come to an End(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
06:06 PM 3/25/05
I cant stand to see it anymore,
I cant just stand by and watch her heart break,
Before she goes over the edge,
how much more do you think she can take?
She lost me almost a year ago,
she cant lose you too,
I mean this girl,
wants to marry you!!!!
Without me she was hurt,
but she was just fine cuz you were there,
But if you go too,
Who will be left to care?
It has been us 5 for over a year,
and that is how it is sposed to stay,
but how is it sposed to be that way,
with you so damn far away?
I love you,
as my brother and my best friend,
without you,
her whole world will come to an end!!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Travis...this is for you...if u r hiding sumthing u need to tell us.......she wont be able to stand it if she lost u the same way she lost me

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» Comments / Feedback
by MaterLuna-26 (3-25-2005 - 06:24 PM)
good and so true i don't know what i would do with him or you.

by sexaefied (3-25-2005 - 06:28 PM)
i love ur poem...its beautiful

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