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» Poem: this is when we get off this ride
this is when we get off this ride
written by burning_tears
06:43 PM 3/25/05
so, i told him off
woohoo for me
we werent really that happy
all we did was fuck
we went on one date
i knew him for 5 months
thats was 5 months too much
i love him
and he duznt give a rats ass about me
so why do i still hurt inside?
hes out of my life completely

maybe i hurt cuz i want him here
or maybe its because i already miss him
i want him to be here
holding me
and i want to kiss him
but i know if i do
it will start all over
this pain i cannot bare
i told him how i felt by email
so he couldnt see the tears i wear

so, i guess, im alone again
though i kinda was before
we were never really together
we just had a "realtionship"
but our ship has sunk
to the depths of hell
and when i look back at this experience
i'll know i did what was the best for my health


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i love you branndon, but i cant take the hurt

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