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Sick of it
written by The_wisp_of_the_wind10:25 PM 3/25/05Im sick of you
Sick of me
I hate this world
*Suicide*
Forget me
Like you have
I will heal all your pain
With my stories
If you heard them
I bet you'd cry
Just like I did
When I found out
My real mother died
By Suicide
And my dad left me
When I was born
That he has
A wife
4 kids
And a golden retriever
On long island
That my best friend
Killed herself because her dad beat her
I am a healer
Talk to me
I swear you wont feel the pain
ANYMORE |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by punkchick135 (3-26-2005 - 05:06 AM)
| your poems are okay and som are pretty good but some of them are too upfront, you need to try to make your poems a little more subtle sometimes. they are good and you have good subjects and ideas you write but you shouldn't just say my dad left me nd my mom killed herself. but all-in-all your poems are pretty goo, i think it'd be cool if you could add more to that one poem of yours...scream. well that's it later er w/e |
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