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» Poem: You're The Loser Now
You're The Loser Now
written by xfadingmemoriesx
08:34 AM 3/26/05
You make me hate life more,
with each passing day.
I try not to listen, but it's hard to ignore,
all the insults you hurl at me, and all the words you say.

You take everything out on me,
I could never express how much I hate you.
The hurt that I feel, is worse than broken knees,
there's never a day that I don't feel blue.

But now I'm stronger,
and I can stand up for myself.
I won't let you push me any further,
the one who will suffer, will be yourself.

I'm gonna kill you in my heart,
and burn you in hell.
I'm gonna show you, you're not smart,
gonna torture you till you yell.

Gonna do what you did to me,
gonna force you to cry in a corner.
I'm gonna let you feel and see,
what's it like to be a loner.

I'll make your wrists bleed,
till there's no more blood remaining.
I'll let hate breed,
wow, I sure do find that entertaining.

You used to laugh whenever I fell down,
now, it's my turn.
I shall watch and smile as you drown,
whatever happens to you, is none of my concern.

You're the loser now.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I hate someone so much I could take a knife and slit his throat. I just wish he would drop dead infronta me. And I'll be laughing like hell. Filled with no remorse or whatsoever. x] Wahahaha. Commentz please. Thankiez.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Spiffay (3-26-2005 - 10:12 AM)
okay kind of harsh but if I hated someone as much as you I would want to do the same, good poem though.

by xXlove+hateXx (3-26-2005 - 10:14 AM)
THAT WAS AWESOME! u go girl!

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