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Broken Hearts And Promises
written by xXlove+hateXx11:21 AM 3/26/05u asked me why i didnt trust anyone,
so i opened up my heart,
all my troubles were forgotten when our
conversations begun.
i found myself in love with u,
keeping it to myself
hoping u'd feel the same way too.
i talked about how other guys hurt me,
u promised that u never wud do the same,
and i actually believed thee.
i was sure that u were the one,
that u wudnt break my heart,
that my search was done.
but after everything, u did break my heart,
even tho u promised u wudnt,
now im feeling torn apart.
after a while u say that ur stupid for thinking
it wud work,
i thot about this for a while,
and i guess im stupid for thinking the same.
u wanna forget about this all,
u say that it might be for the best,
i hesitate to agree but i do anyway while im
catching tears as they fall.
ill pretend this never occured,
but i learned never to trust again,
im not believing one word.
u said u wouldnt break my heart,
u promised,
and now the fact that ur ignoring this is like stabbing my heart with a dart. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
danny, remember how i said that i only write a poem about somebody after theyve hurt me somehow? remember when i said id never wud write a poem about u? well i did.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by TheUndeadBlackRose (3-26-2005 - 11:25 AM)
by xXlove+hateXx (3-26-2005 - 11:49 AM)
| o, thankies, urs r awesome! |
by xfadingmemoriesx (3-26-2005 - 12:01 PM)
| omggg.. that happened to me too :(. i was devastated at first. but now i've gotten over it. and i've moved on. i hope you feel better though. i love your poem :) |
by ShanesBrokenAngel (3-26-2005 - 02:18 PM)
| aww i love it...it reminds me of my x... |
by loveUorLoveMe? (3-26-2005 - 02:50 PM)
| o wow..i liked a little to much..i could relate to your poem too..good job! **Emily** |
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