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Pain and Addictions
written by xfadingmemoriesx12:08 PM 3/26/05Pain inflicted,
hate builds.
So addicted,
dreams killed.
Screaming away,
crying alone.
Cutting everyday,
future unknown. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Lol shortest poem I've ever wrote. Just some dumbassss shit. I realised I'm getting worse at poems now. :( Pleez comment though. Ty.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Spiffay (3-26-2005 - 12:10 PM)
| Your not getting worse at poems, and it may be short but sometimes the most meaningful things are said in a small amount of words. |
by TheUndeadBlackRose (3-26-2005 - 12:11 PM)
| No way, it's short and sweet. I write long poems, I think they're shit, but people seem to like them. =D So keep up the good work. ~Grey |
by Spiffay (3-26-2005 - 12:15 PM)
| Oh and I've read your other poems and they're just as good, and this one might be even better. |
by xXlove+hateXx (3-26-2005 - 12:25 PM)
| that was prolly the best short poem ive ever heard. AWESome job~! -flamingo |
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