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stfu lady
written by emo to the skibbies
09:11 PM 7/29/04
a shrill voice pops in my ears
i wonder what she fears
i can hear she's in a fright
did she and her boyfriend have a fight

i wonder when she'll stop
will her screeches ever drop?
she was still at it, getting so loud
cant it be smothered in a shroud

i have to hear all the horror
and her boyfriends asking for more
suddenly it stops and it's silent
then you hear her gun pop and bang violent

i think she's gone insane and killed her master
her voice again raises higher and her hand shakes faster
who's going to be next on her shit list
we all should have stopped to listen sooner than piss

her boyfriend thought he owned her, as it seams
he yelled and fought, made her call him master
only now i wont learn how much he made her a disaster
now we put up with her crazy relentless screams


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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-2-2004 - 08:22 AM)
You suck

by NiteStalker (11-3-2004 - 05:00 AM)
WTH... Huh... Typical emo lyrics... Boy I hate...

by ashevil (11-3-2004 - 07:32 PM)
well fuck them all i don 't fuckin care what them assholes think this shit is good i like ur poems

by (anonymous) (11-3-2004 - 07:42 PM)
Your poetry vaguely resembles vomit. You're familiar with all the cliche nastiness of it, but the rest is too disgusting to look at.

by (anonymous) (11-4-2004 - 03:59 AM)
My GOD this is bad.

by (anonymous) (11-4-2004 - 04:00 AM)
My GOD this is bad.

by Morbid Angel (11-4-2004 - 12:34 PM)
(anonymous) you're right but I think you're the same person who said I suck, just leave people alone. Their poems are their buisness and if you don't like them then don't fucking read them, spaz.

by bleeder (11-22-2004 - 07:09 PM)
wait im lost wtf is this in here for "we all should have stopped to listen 'sooner than piss" last part of that yea don make sense dont rhyme just to rhyme it kinda needs to make sense andfollow the topic im reallly not trying to be rude here but i just dont get it

by (guest) (2-4-2005 - 04:51 AM)
You are AMAZING.

by XxEmoGURL17xX (3-21-2005 - 03:12 AM)
I truly like ur poem....thoes other ppl aint emo....so wtf do they know about us? i loved it....keep it up **EmO nIxXy**

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