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» Poem: GIVE IT UP!!! (my only love)
GIVE IT UP!!! (my only love)
written by for_future_use42
08:46 PM 3/26/05
I told you that i loved you,
and you said it wasn't enouh,
you said you needed power,
and i was just too tough.
You told me i was pretty,
you told me i was young.
I told you i was 18,
so i wouldn't seem so dumb.
You said i was your love,
I said that you were mine.
You said your love would last,
Until the end of time.
But instead your now behind me,
where ever i should go,
Fallowing me closely,
so my life you could know.
You said that i was flirting,
Isn't that a shame,
You slapped me up across my face,
I wouldn't play that game,
You expected me to take it,
but you could never know,
I'm my own person,
I can let you go.


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... Slow and simple.

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by corrandarcy (3-26-2005 - 08:50 PM)
Wow, it kinda reminds me of someone I once knew.

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