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Two Months
written by brokenxsmile11:22 PM 3/26/05It's been two months
And they was great
We're moving along
At an awesome rate
You asked me if
We could go two more
I'm more than willing
You're what I love for
I love you right now
And I always will
And I know I don't have to
Question if you love me still
When you look at us on paper
We aren't the best
But in general we are
Definately better than the rest
I'm lucky to have you
And that you love me
And I promise that right here
Is where I always want to be |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Not the best I could've done, but...
Happy Two Month Baby!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by PreciousIllusion (3-27-2005 - 12:07 AM)
| I like it! It's sweet and full of emotion. plus you used really good wording! |
by loveUorLoveMe? (3-27-2005 - 12:33 AM)
| aww..i liked it! congrates on your two months! **Emily** |
by sprawledacrossthefloor (3-27-2005 - 12:44 AM)
| thats really sweet. congrats. two months can seem like forever when you're with the right person. hold onto them. |
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