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» Poem: BrOkEn PrOmIsE
BrOkEn PrOmIsE
written by Xx_mistik_xX
12:07 AM 3/27/05
remember that promise that i asked you to make?
The one that ment that i would never cry,
over somthing you did, or somthing you said?
Well, i still dont want to say goodbye.

Remember what i told you about me hurting myself?
I cant deal with this shit right now.
I slit my wrists for every sorry, remember?
I can still feel the blood seeping right now.

Do you want me to do it?
Agian and agian?
Until my creamy skin,
is stained with red?

I said i was sorry,
i forgave you too,
i hate these fights,
just as much as you.

I dont want it to be over,
but i want you to know,
You broken Your Promise,
so now, i will go.


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» Comments / Feedback
by smashed_heart (3-27-2005 - 12:37 AM)
i love that poem,its really good,i no how u feel

by Confused_Girl (3-27-2005 - 01:21 AM)
I loved the poem, i have felt the same ways so many times. Keep writing!

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