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My disease(please comment)
written by mychemromance05:25 AM 3/27/05Somethings inside
Trying to break free.
Nowhere to hide
It takes over me.
I can't control it
It hates to be happy.
I can't take this shit
Can no one help me?
It takes another hit
Destroying my humanity.
I can't fight it.
It becomes my enemy.
I try to force it down
But it just takes away from me.
I feel like I'm going to drown.
I can't remember who I used to be.
No one can help now
So run from my disease. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by trytokillme (3-27-2005 - 05:26 AM)
| Wow...deeply awesome..keep it up.
//Jenna |
by magical_goddess_of_nature (3-27-2005 - 05:43 AM)
| what is wrong with you to feel that way, you sound so depress and sad. what is the diease |
by Cut_Up_Angels (3-27-2005 - 05:51 AM)
| wow i really like it yuor diese sounds like personallity disorter i have it hey U2 me i have some questions to ask |
by Metal_freak (3-28-2005 - 06:41 PM)
| OH MY GOD! I t was like so good. Ya. good for you. No one get mad at me its an inside joke only between me and the writer. |
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