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They let me die (please comment)
written by mychemromance05:45 AM 3/27/05To die is to rest
To rest is to dream
To dream is to die
Life is like a race
I try to run from death
I try to run from pain
But I can't hide
I can't run
My legs move but I get nowhere
And death creeps up.
My pain shows through
And nobody cares
They never help
They never try
They let me die |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I don't know where this one came from either.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by magical_goddess_of_nature (3-27-2005 - 05:49 AM)
| hey lets talk i will do my best to help heres my yahoo address mistress_goddess_of_witches999@yahoo.com. im and i will do my best to help you |
by smashed_heart (3-27-2005 - 05:52 AM)
| hey i want to help if ur interested tell me |
by trytokillme (3-27-2005 - 05:55 AM)
| God..keep it up...your an amazing writer. |
by Cut_Up_Angels (3-27-2005 - 06:00 AM)
| u r a really deep writter and i like that so am i check oout my poems and U2 me and we'll talk u sound really cool |
by BeautifulGurlie15 (3-27-2005 - 06:12 AM)
| rhis poem has alot of meaning to it. keep up the good work. |
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