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Feeling You Falling (plz comment)
written by bloody_tears_girl10:46 AM 3/27/05feeling you falling away from me
screaming your name, unto my knees
watching your figure slowly disapear
thats when i realized your no longer here
feeling you falling out of my arms
now all i have left is my self-caused harm
your deep strong voice is getting more dim
without you, ive had it, im giving in
feeling you falling out of my life
please come back and make it right
and show me that you'll always be there
show me that you'll always care
feeling you falling, slipping out of my hands
you're the only one who understands
now i can barely see you're face
without you're love, im out of place |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Bite2BreakSkin (3-27-2005 - 11:31 AM)
| omg- ur such a damn great poet. i LUV THIS POEM its really deep and sad. its awsum. keep writing, i luv your work- talk 2 me anytime, xlximaginaryxlx@aol.com, or deadbarbie22@hotmail.com |
by (guest) (3-28-2005 - 07:54 AM)
| i love it and know what ur feelin. ur such a good poety writter
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