» Poem: Right through you |
Right through you
written by wiltedrose03:14 PM 3/27/05I see many things in this world, that are better left unsaid
My view has been unfurled, some people better off dead
A burden unfortunately, I have carried for years
You do this stupid shit, it’s not even worth my tears
You ask so much of me, and I expected nothing in return
But yet you use me, come back for more, when will you learn?
So now you ask for even more, of which I cannot give
It’s time for you to stop this, Just let me live
I see so much in this world of which I can’t undo
But the only thing I see right now is right through you |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Trekie (3-27-2005 - 03:34 PM)
Perfectly written. Thank you for sharing! |
by Scythe42 (3-27-2005 - 03:37 PM)
That was awsome. It was perfectly written,and it had a very good flow and rythym. |
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