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Daddy **PLZ COMMENT**
written by BeautifulGurlie15
04:17 PM 3/27/05
Daddy why have you abandoned me over the past 5-6 years you act like its ok to pop in and out of my life well i have some news for you it dont work like that or atleast not for me you play with my heart way to much what did i do to deserve this i cry my self to sleep some nights wondering if you were ok gonna call or even bother at all you know its amazing what drugs has done for you over the past couple of years you used to be a wonderful caring person and now you a cold person i dont know who you are anymore what did i ever do to you


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» Comments / Feedback
by solice (3-27-2005 - 04:25 PM)
That is amazing...you can feel the emotion and the sentiment you put into it..I feel connected to it because I know what its like

by brokenxsmile (3-27-2005 - 06:53 PM)
very sad, but very good. I like it

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