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Rape(plz comment)
written by sk8rchik08:03 AM 3/28/05You throw me down onto the bed
there's nothing i can do,
I cry and scream for someone to help
but it doesn't work, i'm trapped under you.
I plead for you to please stop
as you start to take off my shirt
but you hold my mouth shut
now comes the real hurt.
Soon i am completely undressed
stripped of dignity and pride
i want to get away from you
but there's no where i can hide.
When you finally stop
I lie alone on the bed
you stand over me,
bend down and kiss my head.
"Dont tell anyone about this,
do you got that clear?"
you said with an evil spite.
"Or can you not hear?"
That night is one i'll never forget
i'll just never be the same
all this shit you put me through
and you didnt even know my name. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
it's not true about me but it happened to my friend and this was out of respect for her and what she went through
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-28-2005 - 08:08 AM)
| this is a reallly good poem i hope it didnt happen to you because that would be horribel...just thought i should show some love and leave a comment |
by bloody_tears_girl (3-28-2005 - 08:25 AM)
| that motherfucker! ya i had that happen to me too, i write about it in my other poems, and im so sorry u had to go through that. |
by (guest) (3-28-2005 - 08:38 AM)
| hey man this is a really good poem |
by Darkfire61 (3-28-2005 - 08:41 AM)
| omg if that hapened to u i am so srry and i would help u kick the guys ass anyday |
by lost_soul_666 (3-28-2005 - 08:53 AM)
| thats so unreal its like you were in my head and took the worlds that i want to say but dont know...i like it its so real |
by sk8rchik (3-28-2005 - 09:03 AM)
| thanx all....and to those of you who arent sure if it's real look in the note i left.. |
by DeTsIwT (3-28-2005 - 10:03 AM)
| hey this is an awsome poem but i really hope it didnt happen to you well good poem |
by The Black Halo (3-28-2005 - 12:50 PM)
| I'm doubtful that most of those that commented even read the poem or the footer. They just saw the title and thought 'Oh yeah, let's show some love'.
Here's a little tip for you: don't write about something that you don't really know much about. One can only really feel a poem if the writer knew exactly what they were talking about. |
by lost_soul_666 (3-29-2005 - 07:06 AM)
| i think she can write about whatever she wants even if it didnt happen to her its not your place to say what she can and cant write about....i like that poem and it happen to me and i dont mind her writing about it |
by so_unpredictable (3-29-2005 - 05:30 PM)
| Great poem 2 of my best friens ever were raped.... so i can relate alot |
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