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Crimson Regret
written by Gothic_Pirate02:05 PM 3/28/05A blade
Sharp and shiny
Spill the blood, make it hurt
Tear the flesh
Drip into the tub.
The pain never fades
Make it go away
A soul is dying
Drowning in her sorrows
Lost in her dreams.
Blood pools all around
Her security blanket
Another sling of the blade
Another scar made
Crying to the night.
Drink the water
Taste your own sweet death
Seeping into the drains
Watch yourself
Slip into crimson regret |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It was just one of those days.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by trulybroken57 (3-28-2005 - 02:14 PM)
| i know those days all too well, that is such a beautiful poem....... |
by (guest) (3-28-2005 - 03:49 PM)
| i thought you did a great job!
-jen |
by jaxxy26 (3-29-2005 - 07:29 PM)
| i also know wat its like...that was well done. |
by forevrfalen4 (3-30-2005 - 06:54 AM)
| i remember those days... nice job |
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