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» Poem: The Posessed Boys' Ghost
The Posessed Boys' Ghost
written by untidy_posession
08:14 PM 3/28/05
He is a creature enslaved to his master like a puppet to it's strings,
Captured in a twisted net, his body ripped from it's wings,
He struggles to break free of his restraint thats tied too tight,
Fractured under the pressure, blinded by a non existant light.
He is becoming unbalanced and out of touch,
But holds onto the obsessive hope in his clutch,
The chains begin to weaken and slowly split,
And slowly, gradually he begins to break it,
He is free.


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by faust_seraph (3-29-2005 - 02:26 PM)
hey your very good at this and i like the poem if i could rate it id give it a 10

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