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» Poem: Wondering ( plz comment)
Wondering ( plz comment)
written by CrazyRedEyes
11:17 PM 3/28/05
I sit alone in my room. Thinking of what I should do! But yet I still have no clue. It is hard. I wish it wasnt like this! I wish life was easy but yet everything bad happens to me. I wish the pain would stop so I could take a breath at life and feel the easy breeze but yet everything happens to me. So I sit confused and angery at what the people that think they know me. They know Nothing, NOTHING about me!!! But I still sit alone in the dark wondering what is ahead of me.


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» Comments / Feedback
by cg05punk (3-28-2005 - 11:34 PM)
OMG...I feel the same way...this poem is briliant , and deep...I love it...LOVE it

by girlofthelost_vamplover (3-28-2005 - 11:41 PM)
i love it.....but you do know.....sorry if this sounds rude.....that is the title of one of my favorite Good Charlotte songs.....(8) If you want me to wait, I will wait for you, If you tell me to stay I would stay right through, If you don't wanna say anything at all I'm happy wondering...GO!!!(8)

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