ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: what have i done
what have i done
written by mansonlover91
11:51 PM 3/28/05
I look at your cold body
I look at this knife i have killed you with
I think now i've done it
I've killed the only man I ever loved
But he did not love me back
What was I going to do
He played games with my heart
My heart is not to be played with
But he can not know this now
He is dead
He is cold limp and now
He does not see, hear, taste, smell or feel anything
I have done this to him
Now I am cold limp and now
I can not see, hear, taste, smell, or feel anything
I will be like this because I killed myself


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

[ View mansonlover91's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 119 times


» Comments / Feedback
by mansonlover91 (3-30-2005 - 09:54 PM)
comments plz i have to know what you think

by MySoReSpOt (4-2-2005 - 08:48 PM)
I hope you really didnt kill anyone!:D:D;) Actually great... luved it! Now you know what i think!

» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.