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The poem you can't write
written by butcakes12:05 PM 3/29/05theres that thing you want to write poetry about
theres sumthing inside, yearning, no doubt
it calls from within, but you cant single it out
from thoughts of daily life - certainties and doubt
its on the tip of your tongue
something you cant put your finger on
it hits you heavy, hits like a tonne
yet sways gently, confusing beyond
you know there is something and its hit you off-course and you start not making sense and loose all sense of order. you want to write about something thats not there but you still strive to let it out. you know its possible to write about it, but its still untouchable to you, so you just start writing anyway...
but it leads to a poem that rhymes, but makes no sense. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i know there is sumthing i wanna write a poem about, but i dont even know what it is - its sumthing that will blow peoples minds away if i was able to work out what it is; but i cant touch it... its like hearing about sumthing, but not seeing it - i know there is sumthing i wanna write about, but I cant write about it... hahahaha im SOOO confused right now...!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-29-2005 - 12:11 PM)
| ;o good poem. and im not just saying that cause you commented on mine! it's good. i could never write something like that xP well. good luck with the poem you cant write yet. >< -Amanda |
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