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She took you - please comment
written by yorki_lass03:44 PM 3/29/05why did u leave me?
what did i do?
is it so bad?
that i love you?
what did she have?
small bum big breasts?
what is it she had?
that made her best?
i hate her you know
for being what you need
is it her love?
that you do heed?
She should rot and burn
for what shes done
i cunt give a crap
if shes the one
does she make you laugh?
does she make you cry?
I hope one day
shell say goodbye
only then youll know
this hurt inside
but dont you worry
ill be by your side |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AngelWildcat (3-29-2005 - 03:46 PM)
| It sucks that someone's hurt you like this; but it doesn't help that they know they can always run back to you. Then they can't really see what the have/had. |
by hellbound89 (4-10-2005 - 02:12 PM)
| hey i really dont appreciate u callin me a poser and sayin i copy my poems i dont so if u got somethin 2 say then fuckin get ahold of me bitch my email is hellbound89@AOL.COM AND DONT FUCKIN RUN UR MOUTH BOUT MY POETRY U SUCIDAL SLUT
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