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all u and me-plz leave comments
written by yorki_lass
04:03 PM 3/29/05
to all you many people
who think that you know me
stop and think a moment
who might i be?

you have never seen me,
you dont know who i am
i could be tony blair,
osma or saddam.

i could be a bad person,
though i tell you i am not
how do u know my lies?
i might not tell alot

you jus read my poetry
and comment at the end
you could be praising a killer
or maybe just a friend

you dont know my background
or what im all about
i could like goin clubbing
or fishing for sum trout

you all sit there and build
a picture in your heads
about what i may look like
while your being fed

i dont know you either
i could hate your wretched guts
but i cant say now
id be tlkin outta my butt

you may all sit in critic
and think that ones a slut
but i could be a virgin
i could jus be a kluts

i could be a goth
or a punk even maybe
but ill tell you what i am
im jus simply me

now please dont let this poem
think twice what im about
because this goes 4 u answell
i dont know if your a lout

you could have murdered many
you could have lied to some
but ill tell you something now
i find freedom in your poem


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by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 04:38 PM)
it was so stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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