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» Poem: Where did it all go Wrong
Where did it all go Wrong
written by mattwhatever
06:45 PM 3/29/05
When I look back and see what I feel
Why I did the things I did, they make me feel ill

Where did I lose my focus, concede my goals
Stooped looking inside, ignored my soul

How did I let things come this far?
I'm trapped my feet stuck in tar

Friendships, lovers wasted
Death, lies and betrayal tasted

I'm lost inside myself
Confused by my spirit exhausted by wealth

My priorities mixed, my life an illusion
I've grown accustom to ultimate exclusion

I don't understand why things have ended this way
I thought I had control, that today was my day

Sometimes karma creeps upon you
I hope that it doesn’t destroy you too.


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my fucked up life

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by chaoticthoughts (3-29-2005 - 07:00 PM)
I like you poem....alot...i can relate to you on that one....good job

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