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» Poem: It's NOT Just Rape
It's NOT Just Rape
written by bloody_tears_girl
02:23 AM 3/30/05
people tell me to get over it,
but i'm not just gonna fuckin forget it!
the pain will never go away
i live with it to this very day.

people say it's no big deal,
YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT I FUCKIN FEEL!
i was the one underneath that guy,
don't tell me it's a god damn lie!

i was the one who was begging him to stop,
you think it's ok? well it's fucking not!
i had to hear him screaming at me
i was so scared, cant you see?

i was the one who had to see his face,
i was the one who had to be in that place!
don't say that it's just a little thing,
dont you get it, he ruined everything!

people say that it's just rape,
but it's not something you can just escape
and now there's nothing you can do,
for all those who think it's "just rape" FUCK YOU!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
when i was raped ppl always said it was no big deal, well if it happened to you, its not "just rape" is it?

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» Comments / Feedback
by tortured_angel_1 (3-30-2005 - 02:32 AM)
whoever said that is retarded and douesn't deserve a voice. don't get too upset about what the assholes say.

by dontwannastop86 (3-30-2005 - 02:42 AM)
sorry you feel that way but damn that was a good poem ( best in a long time 4 me ) it got me hooked and it rymed all the way through u used good words and i could feel your anger. GOOD JOB! n fuck every1 that thinks that its just rape

by lpcrawlinggrl (3-30-2005 - 03:00 AM)
exactly... just fuck them... they obviously dont care...

by (guest) (3-30-2005 - 04:06 AM)
about your poem..i was really touched by it..i even cried..not just cause it was very good. because i know how u feel..im guessing this was done to u, and i guess im kinda happy im not allow, but also angry and upset that im not..good poem

by Bite2BreakSkin (3-30-2005 - 06:24 AM)
dude this is a KICK ASS POEM! u have talent, and it sends a good message in this poem- an important message. i had a bf once that thought rape was no big deal, he always asked me"but..didnt it feel good?" real immature shyt..yea that ended fast. i HATE people who dont think anything of it. they never know how it really is untill it happens 2 them..

by Metal_freak (3-30-2005 - 05:19 PM)
You know the truth so you shouldn't even listen to those dumb asses they be saying diff. if it was them. But people always think if its not there problem then it must not be a problem. Which is totally wrong.

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