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u give me pain
written by isaac201102:38 AM 3/30/05u give me pain
u make me insane
your sub post to be there for me
but u leev
u tell me to go
win u already know i know
i find it in my home
u send me to my room
it s like a empty tome
i here the fighting but i
but i act like i don't
u give me pain
u tell me what u fill about me to my face
it like im a big disgrace
u give me pain
u pour the blame
will i ever be sane |
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its about my dad
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| » Comments / Feedback | by isaac2011 (3-30-2005 - 02:48 AM)
by ~:Arya:~ (3-30-2005 - 03:09 AM)
| The poem has depth, but you should work on spelling and grammar, most definitely. |
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