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forbiden love
written by bloody_tears_girl
03:43 AM 3/30/05
in the night we sit together,
the most special night i'll always remember
i sit on your lap and kiss your soft cheek,
out of all the girls you could have, why me?
i never dreamed i'd end up with someone like you,
i hope you feel the same way too.

we just lay there and stare up at the stars,
making sweet love in your junkie car.
so why do we have to keep it low?
about our love, cant they know?
just because your a little older than me,
only by five years, what's so hard to see?

love should never be a crime,
they should understand it this time.
i love you, and you love me,
WHAT'S SO FUCKING HARD TO SEE!!!


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by blood-tears-within (3-30-2005 - 04:20 AM)
i love it! its a true love and i dont see why some people just cant understand it people love eachother no matter what their ages are.

by bloody_tears_girl (3-30-2005 - 04:23 AM)
thnx, its good to know SOMEONE agrees with me. :)

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